Johny Johny, the name echoed in the house. The voice so familiar, so drunk that Johny still a kid hid in the closet. The closet he was so afraid of since childhood, for that closet had a monster and he was not afraid or anything but this until recently. But still he chose the closet to the dark hoarse voice that called his name.
Johny Johny, the name echoed in the house. As he stood there in the closet, he realized that he wasn’t afraid of the monster anymore. He overcame on fear with another fear. He looked up at himself gaining grip as his legs stopped shaking beneath the sweat on his face. It was just him and his demons, the demon being fear.
Johny Johny, the name that echoed in the house was louder and stood outside the closet. A man with a sturdy attire with a bottle in one hand and a belt in the other stood in the dimming dusk. The door opened and there stood Johny. The greatest victory would be to defeat himself and that he did by overcoming his second fear, by standing up for himself. His eyes so fierce and his clutches so strong for a kid that the voice trembled beneath its’ breath, for Johny was a kid no more.
Johny Johny, the voice echoed in he house, the voice which was the reason for him to overcome his fears, a voice that he always loved, a voice he always wanted to protect while the drunken voice that he stopped fearing was heard no more. Never. Ever.
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P.S. What is this?, you ask. I wish I knew. I just had this closet thing in my mind for some time now and there is more to it. I believe that this is the beginning. I know that I am little rusty, ha ha funny, don’t say or think otherwise, since I haven’t been blogging lately and that I was involved with were , as you know are umm, note worthy. Well, thanks for dropping by and I guess I have to improve on this a lot.
0 responses to “Fear.”
Johny Johny I'm confused 0_o
The 1st lines instantly brought that God forsaken song-Johny Johny (hindi) in my head.
Well, to be honest you can improve on this. Bring a little more clarity and you're set!
P.S. Please don't be offended. Keep writing 🙂
Johny Johny I'm confused 0_o
The 1st lines instantly brought that God forsaken song-Johny Johny (hindi) in my head.
Well, to be honest you can improve on this. Bring a little more clarity and you're set!
P.S. Please don't be offended. Keep writing 🙂
I figured as much.
It just came to my mind and I had to write that down. I know that I should have double checked what I wrote on grounds of clarity.
I will refine this.
Oh no. Never. Comments are always welcomed. And opinions like this bring the better out from a person, I guess.
I figured as much.
It just came to my mind and I had to write that down. I know that I should have double checked what I wrote on grounds of clarity.
I will refine this.
Oh no. Never. Comments are always welcomed. And opinions like this bring the better out from a person, I guess.
Sounds promising 🙂 This is the first time I'm commenting on your blog. Loved some of your old posts. Waiting to read the sequel of this one.
Sounds promising 🙂 This is the first time I'm commenting on your blog. Loved some of your old posts. Waiting to read the sequel of this one.
Why, Thank You. 🙂
Again thanks for dropping by.
Wow, you read the previous posts also. I am truly flattered. Thank You. 🙂
Why, Thank You. 🙂
Again thanks for dropping by.
Wow, you read the previous posts also. I am truly flattered. Thank You. 🙂
Maybe a sequel for our unanswered questions? And woohoo AK has made his mark back into the blogging world!
Maybe a sequel for our unanswered questions? And woohoo AK has made his mark back into the blogging world!
Wow. You people have questions. Great.
I figured it would be left as a mystery and well imagination as well.
Ha ha. Thanks. 🙂
The last time you said that I didn't blog for nearly two months. 😛
Wow. You people have questions. Great.
I figured it would be left as a mystery and well imagination as well.
Ha ha. Thanks. 🙂
The last time you said that I didn't blog for nearly two months. 😛
I'm guessing Johnny got tired of waiting for his father to get his act together and killed him?
I'm guessing Johnny got tired of waiting for his father to get his act together and killed him?
The abstract feel is good but I guess you stretched it a bit too thin. A bit of clarity, a tinge of mystery and a slightly more explicit plot would have been 'it'. Welcome back 🙂
The abstract feel is good but I guess you stretched it a bit too thin. A bit of clarity, a tinge of mystery and a slightly more explicit plot would have been 'it'. Welcome back 🙂
Yeah, something like that. That was left for the imagination of the reader actually.
Yeah, something like that. That was left for the imagination of the reader actually.
Yeah. I wanted the same thing. Guess, I need a little improvement on this.
Thank You. 🙂
Yeah. I wanted the same thing. Guess, I need a little improvement on this.
Thank You. 🙂